Commission : Cupcake

This is just to adorable . I'm fairly sure that you are tired from hearing this but they are absolutely cute
The soft subtle colouring enhances the soothing, love dove atmosphere greatly. Their interaction and body gesture suggest to the viewer that they might be (or are really) in love. Those gorgeous effects adds a wonderful touch too. The best part however, like in most of your drawings, is the hair. I love the details in them

But there's a thing or two I'd like to point out if you don't mind :3. Hisoka hands are looking a little chubby for his body built. I think you should make them a tad longer. I completely understand if it's hard for you; hands aren't that easy anyway XD;. Also, may suggest changing the watermark font? There's nothing wrong with it. It's just personal preference I suppose.

I hope I didn't sound rude
Keep up the good work plu